The most recent thing written 10:15pm 7-23-05
fading lights
upside down reflections
from an upside down retina
looking at these passing lights
in the backseat of a mini-van
re-thinking what's been re-thought
too many times to tell.
using this soundtrack
to fuel the mind's streaming film
the narration pauses only
between acts,
and this one's been going for some time...
posted by Andronicus @ 9:05 PM
2 Comments:
nicely done, pirate.
I really like this poem Andy.....universal, I think. I felt like you got in my head at a time when I was in the exact same (physical) place thinking the exact same thing.......I just FELT what you were writing in a deja vu kind-of way.
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